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...gawd, why do my most lame favorites always end up appearing here?!

But seriously, I don't favorite in any particular direction - be it spectacular canvases of artwork (both digital or physical), cute little pixel animations, imaginative literature or anything else dA offers, if it speaks to me, you'll find it in my favorites.

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Emily
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
Hong Kong
What do 5 different Primary school by age 8, 3 countries, a 250 page/hour reading speed, and far too many doodles in my textbooks have in common? Duh - Me!
Originally Australian, Dad’s job as a pilot has helped me grow up in a multicultural environment where I’ve learned to be myself; confident and a little crazy. I consider myself a hobby artist, with great interest in cartooning, watercolor painting, words, and sometimes photography. My future ambition is to be an author/illustrator. I’ve been told it’s tough to make a living off that, but then, we’ll just have to wait and see, won’t we?
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  • Mood: Optimism
  • Listening to: white noise
  • Reading: Angels and Demons - Dan Brown
  • Watching: Malcolm X: Make it Plain
  • Playing: ~(=s=~)~(=8=)~(~=3=)~
  • Eating: roast lamb sandwiches...omnomnom
  • Drinking: dihydrogen monoxide
After finally reading my entire novel from beginning to end, I wondered whether the lump in my throat was good writing, or just bittersweet nostalgia.

It was definitely just nostalgia.

I am amazed at how much my writing improved across the 5-odd months it took me to finish the 82 thousand word first manuscript - it gives me hope for myself yet.

In the meantime, my eyes were also opened as to how fast my pacing was (TOO fast), my bad habit of telling not showing (especially in flashbacks), description and backstory dumping (as fun as it is to write....), overuse of cliches (and its opposite, overuse of obscure similes...eyes as wide as camel hooves?) and how little character development I wrote compared to how much my headcanon contains.

Now I know what my problems are, I can appreciate the few things that did strike me as good all the more (of all my characters, Noah seemed to develop the most, which I honestly did not expect).

But anyway, tonight I performed the first major cuts of the editing process. Over 15 thousand words word of subplots and description just highlighted and deleted....and it feels weirdly nice.

Even though I always knew it'd be necessary, I imagined I'd be wincing right up until the moment I pressed the backspace bar. But I never did.

I just keep thinking about all the extra words I now have, and how I'm going to expand this scene, and that scene, and rewrite all the dialogue, and the beginning, and delete this character but show this one more....

I like it.

:)

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:iconkirilee:
=kirilee Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great gallery! Thanks for adding me to your watch list :)
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:iconresidentbrain:
~ResidentBrain Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! Your stock is great inspiration for outfits, and terrific reference for poses, so really thank YOU.
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:iconkirilee:
=kirilee Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait to see what the inspiration leads to :)
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:iconremi-ko:
~Remi-Ko Apr 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm so glad I found you, you're talented ! :heart:
Can't wait for more of your work, both visual and literature ! :love:
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:iconresidentbrain:
~ResidentBrain Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
I think your DD is well deserved. I am fascinated by philosophy offered as fiction, which is the essence of Sci-Fi or fantasy, in my opinion and aspirations! Thanks for sharing. :frail:
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:iconresidentbrain:
~ResidentBrain Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:O I'm honored! I tend to agree with your comment on sci-fi/fantasy, which is why I write what I'd like to read. Thank you so much for the support.
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
I like to be surprised so I often merely take dictation, when I write. Ever try it?
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:iconresidentbrain:
~ResidentBrain Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dictation, as in speak out loud? Stream of conscious sort of thing?

Well, I've certainly tried speaking aloud but that's always been as a part of the editing process (with a friend on hand to copy stuff down), rather than a means of writing itself.

How do you do it?
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~Nimo13 Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey Brain, like your style.
keep up the kickass work:)
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